Reviewer: Keerawa Signed Date: 10/22/06 - 01:31PM Title: Chapter 1

This really is a gorgeous piece;  seduction occuring at the intersection of a few centuries of insecurities and a few millenia of fears.

 

The descriptions, from the bar at various times of the week, to MacLeod's clothing, to the sex itself, all evoke both visual pictures and just the right mood.



Author's Response:

Ooo, Thank You!  I always feared I overdescribed things in this piece, but I was probably too close to it.  It's reassuring to hear it all hung together.

 

MacG