Quite nice, I like the tempo of it.
Author's Response: Glad you liked. Yes, I\'ve enjoyed Blank Verse ever since I first read Browning. I can\'t use it for my songs, of course, since those have to rhyme too, but I can use it for internal monologs such as this one. Note the similarities with \"Wee Black Dove\". Should I do more of these? So far, I\'ve needed the stimulus of some-forum-or-other\'s Challenge to come up with them. Hmmm, but they are faster and easier to write than whole short stories... Hmmm. --Leslie <;)))>< www.lesliefish.com